child+obesity+report


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<span style="font-size: 32pt; color: rgb(255,0,255);">**Child obesity** <span style="color: rgb(255,0,255);">Obesity is a growing problem that needs to be stopped. Children now aren't getting exercise and their eating to much fast food as the years go on children are exercising less and but getting more and more obese.

<span style="display: block; color: rgb(255,0,255); text-align: justify;">**Paragraph 1**Obesity is what doctors call it when you have to much fat.For a boy when 25% of his body weight is fat then he is classified as obese.For a girl when 32% of her body weight is fat then she is classified as obese. Obesity is mostly caused by lack of exercise and over eating.Children who do not exercise and sit in front of the tv and computer,and eat more calories than what they use,will become overweight or obese. Now days kids chose to play computer games,ps2,ps3,x-box,wii and lots more non-physical activites that take up lots of time so there then isnt any time to be active,parents need to make an effort to plan time for their children to be active. Outdoor activites allow children to get the exercise they need and prevents them from snacking in between meals on snacks around the house.

.Teens whose parents drink fizzy every day are nearly 40% more llikely to drink fizzy every day themselves than teenagers whose parents do not drink fizzy. .Teens whose parents eat five servings of fruit and vegetables daily are 16% more likely to do the same than teenagers whose parents do not eat five servings a day.
 * Paragraph 2**Children tend to eat what their parents eat,says a new study that thinks parents are part of the cause to the growing obesity problem among children and teenagers. Researchers found teenagers are more likely to eat five servings of fruit and vegetables a day,if their parents do.So teenagers whose parents eat fast food or drink fizzy are more likely to do the same.Every day 2 million California teenagers(62%) drink fizzy and 1.4 million(43%) eat fast food but only 38% eat five or more servings of fruit and vegetables. Nearly one-third(30%) of california's teenagers are overweight or obese. The California Health Interveiw Survey found out that:

but there are solutions to this growing problem you can change your lifestyle by cuting down on fast food and eating healthy foods like fruit, vegetables, milk, cheese, wheat, oats and meat, limiting computer, ps2, ps3, wii and x-box time and instead being active. Being active doesnt always mean playing sports, getting exercise can just be walking the dog for an hour.
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So cut down on the junk and and games and live a happy, healthier life.

By Samara


 * __Miss Crawford - A great start, Samara. You have used loads of facts & interesting statistics. Go through and check your capital letters.__**