mirror+writing

MIRROR WRITING 2ND DRAFT The girl staring back at me seems //**__familer__**.// Her eyes are forever changing blue to green and green to blue,no matter what colour they are they always sparkle with fleeks of gold. Her __**//uncontrolby//**__ curly hair is quite thin and is blonde on top and brown underneath.__**she //(capital)//**__ is fair skined but her cheeks are nearly always rosey red, which makes her face __red **//( red like a...)//**__**//.//** her face is //__**scatered**__// with a handful of __**//bearly//**__ visable freckles.

She can clearly remember when she was 4 and at kindergarden. Someone went out the door she got too close and the door shut with her thumb jammed in. All the other kids stared at her and she stared back, not making a sound. __she//**(capital)**//__ then started to get annoyed when her thumb wouldn't come out. About 5 minutes later the teachers noticed and took her to the doctors. Thankfully her thumb wasn't broken, just extremly numb. She was very glad that she had a sling because that meant that she didnt have to pack up for the rest of the week. Her mum doesn't remember, but she remembers that day like it was yesterday.

She wants to be an actress when shes older but if she can't achieve that then she will settle for being a jockey as she simply adores horse riding. Some of her other hobbies include reading, shopping and swimming. __her**//(capital//**__**//)//** favourite subject at school is english, She hates spelling as well as maths and writing. She has a number of friends and gets on with them all nearly all of the time. __she//**(capital**//__//**)**// has two brothers that live in __england//**(capital**//__//**)**// with her dad and stepmum, but she just lives with her mum and stepdad.

__as//**(capital**//__//**)**// I walk I way from the mirror I think to myself darn I'm going to miss the bus!!

by Samara Stimpson-Coleman.

You have missed a lot of capital letters at the start of sentences - you need to remember this for next time.__**
 * __Miss Crawford - A great piece of writing, Samara. I still can't believe it took 5 minutes for them to notice you!

FINAL COPY **MIRROR WRITING** The girl staring back at me seems famlier.Her eyes are forever changing blue to green and green to blue,no matter what colour they are they always sparkle with fleeks of gold.her uncontrolable curly hair is quite thin and is blonde on top and brown underneath.She is fair skined but her cheeks are nearly always rosey red which makes her face as red as a rose. Her face is scattered with a handful of barely visable freckles.

She can clearly remember when she was 4 and at kindergarden Someone went out the door she got to close and the door shut with her thumb jammed in. All the other kids stared at her and she stared back not making a sound, she then started to get annoyed when her thumb wouldnt come out,about 5 minutes later the teachers noticed and took her to the doctors. Thankfully her thumb wasn't broken just extremly numb.She was very glad that she had a sling because that meant that she didnt have to pack up for the rest of the week. Her mum doesn't remember but she does she remembers that day like it was yesterday.

She wants to be an actress when shes older but if she can't achieve that then she will settle for being a jockey as she simply adores horse riding some of her other hobbies include reading, shopping and swimming. Her favourite subject at school is english but she hates spelling as well as maths and writing. She has a number of friends and get on with them all nearly all of the time.She has two brothers that live in England with her dad and stepmum,but she just lives with her mum and stepdad.

As I walk I away from the mirror I think to myself darn im going to miss the bus!!

by Samara Stimpson-Coleman.